Critical Error

Critical Error

I truly wish to thank all of you for tuning in and reading along with Eilea and family in Critical Error. Your varied comments have been encouraging and heartwarming. I have a few changes and editing to do which I find exciting and stimulating (all part of the ongoing process) even as I have noted several […]

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Critical Error

Critical Error Epilogue

They were a family.  Together they attended the hearing which was comparatively short.  Paul mentioned they were hoping to get a specific judge who took a hard line on bullying, cyber-bullying and stalking.  Not to mention shooting at cops.  They did. Sitting quietly side by side, they listened to his conclusions. “Your actions were depraved, […]

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Critical Error

Critical Error 76

Secretly, Paul wished the current events at an end.  He’d enjoy the opportunity of knowing this family, especially Eilea, under “normal” circumstances.  Still having witnessed their interactions under tumultuous situations,  he was more than impressed and certainly drawn to each of them. Eilea was concerned.  Not only because of the current situation but because she […]

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Critical Error

Critical Error 75

Christina stepped back wiping tears from her cheeks.  “Don’t tell mom!  She’ll worry if she knows I’m upset.” Paul smiled, ‘like mother like daughter’. “I think the telling should be yours, Christina.  She needs to know that her life matters to you and perhaps she’ll be less inclined to take unnecessary risks.” “I know, that […]

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