Paul was astounding. He entertained, joked, teased, and he had Andrew seemed to be hitting it off with several high fives on numerous occasions. They […]
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A developing short story Critical Error follows Eilea, who faces a growing campaign of fear, terror, and intimidation soon escalates to include her family, What had begun as postcards and letters quickly turns into anonymous phone calls, and threats against all those who surround her.
Eilea’s desperation for assistance turns to law enforcement to protect her family and begin a journey to find the perpetrator, a mystery ensures that before the end you will be on the edge of your seat.
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They fell into bed with thoughts swirling in their heads about what he might do next. Paul had men in place and it was a […]
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“I don’t mind admitting it was incredibly upsetting, seeing that!” Christina interrupted. “Still, we’re not kids, mom. This includes us. We need to know your […]
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They were laughing and joking when they returned to Paul’s house and everyone headed for the media room. Christina hurried to the computer hoping she’d […]
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“I’ve obviously had anxious moments but this is a whole new level of anxiety. I don’t know where or what more importantly who he’ll strike […]
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Now the shock was wearing off, anger took its place. Blowing out a deep breath she suddenly said, “Let me just say, I’m sorry.” Before […]
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Eilea dried off, donned shorts and top, dabbing at her wet hair as the teens took another turn. The crowd laughed and jeered from the […]
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The following two days passed much the same, relaxed enjoyment on the beach with a few games thrown in. Since Brandon and Christina weren’t able […]
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As soon as breakfast was over they planned an outing on the beach whereby Christina and Brandon could relax in the sun while enjoying the […]
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Eilea was missing her early morning run; determined to get back to it today, she dawned her gear and quietly let herself out, began stretching […]
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“Oh, I meant to ask, what happened with the injured officer and does it relate?” “He arrived on time, was scouring the outskirts in case […]
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In a voice laced with despair, she asked, “What do we do now?” “As I see it, you have two options; leave and take the […]
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“He’s gone to check it out.” “You can’t tell me he thinks that crazy person did this! How would he know which ride we were […]
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Christina laughed, wincing in pain, “Oooh, mom, don’t make me laugh, please, it hurts!” “I’ll be right back.” Eilea left Paul talking to Brandon and […]
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“Yes.” “Doctor Morrison is examining them now. Fill out these forms, will you? When your done, you can talk to the doctor, he should have […]
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Eilea hustled through the living room a smile pasted on her face. “Alright let’s go wake those boys.” Pounding on the cabin door, they called […]
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“Andrew you can sleep in my room, I’ll take the couch.” Officer Deans accompanied the young men outside. The girls went to say good night […]
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Paul said, “Drop me here. There won’t be enough room in one vehicle, I’ll take my truck and bring some of the family back with […]
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Paul said, “Drop me here. There won’t be enough room at the cabins for the car. I’ll take my truck and bring some of the […]
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Eilea and the kids had left at ten forty-two. Paul anxiously inspected his watch; they’d been gone twenty minutes exactly. Harold’s pulse continued steady, but […]
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“Yes, it’s me.” Listening to the scrape of the deadbolt against metal, the door was barely opened when he pushed inside. “Are the kids back […]
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“I’ll make sure Mr. Harrow comes with me if I need to return,” Sanders replied belligerently. Within minutes, the task was completed. Gear in hand […]
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“I’m in two minds about calling Brandon and Cliff’s parents, to inform them about what’s happening. Then they can decide whether or not they want […]
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The food was delicious. The fish and shellfish were succulent tasty, cooked with care to perfection. Because it was a slow night, the cook came […]
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“Be aware. Don’t deny a gut feeling about any situation you’re in. We may or may not be dealing with the individual causing problems for […]